《Teenage Life》Reading for Writing PPT
第一部分內(nèi)容：寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是讀一封建議信，了解建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言特征，然后再寫(xiě)一封建議信。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing
(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model
10 September，2018
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?
I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.
All the best，Susan Luo
(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
①____________ vt.建議 ②___________ adj.不健康的
③____________ vt.鼓勵(lì) ④___________ adj. 有用的
⑤____________ vt.忠告，建議 ⑥________________ 閑暇
⑦_(dá)___________ 盼望，期望 ⑧_______________對(duì)…… 擔(dān)心
⑨____________ 喜愛(ài) ⑩____________ 對(duì)……上癮
⑪____________ 集中精力于 ⑫___________________ 對(duì)……有益處
⑬____________ 交朋友 ⑭____________ 收到……的來(lái)信
⑮___________________ 玩得愉快
Ⅱ.While-writing
假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示給她寫(xiě)一封建議信。
1.要交朋友首先要做一個(gè)朋友；
2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；
3.友誼需要時(shí)間和投入(effort)。
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Teenage LifePPT，第二部分內(nèi)容：課堂解析
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1：the ____________ of the letter
Paragraph 2：the ____________ that you give
Paragraph 3：the writer’s ____________
Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences.
1.Words and phrases
① _____________________________ n. 建議
② _____________________________ n. 情況
③ _____________________________ 交朋友
④ _____________________________ 做……有困難
⑤ _____________________________ 接受某人的建議
⑥_____________________________ 和……同甘共苦
⑦ _____________________________ 需要
⑧ _____________________________ 全心全意
2.Sentences
①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(have trouble in...)
②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do)
③要交朋友為什么不先做一個(gè)朋友呢？(why not)
④你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個(gè)好主意嗎？(Wouldn’t it be a good idea...？)
⑤正如一句諺語(yǔ)說(shuō)的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)
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Teenage LifePPT，第三部分內(nèi)容：篇章結(jié)構(gòu)
The first part：the beginning(date and greeting) of the letter
The second part：the body(fact-stating，your opinion and hope) of the letter
The third part：the end(wishes and signature) of the letter
亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)
1.建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式
①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)。
②I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求建議的來(lái)信。
③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
這里有幫助你的一些建議。
2.表達(dá)建議常用句式
①First(ly)，why not join a club? If you do this，you can make friends.
首先，為什么不參加一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部？如果你這樣做的話，就會(huì)交到朋友。
②Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better.
其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會(huì)感覺(jué)好點(diǎn)。
③Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down.
第三，如果你看書(shū)或聽(tīng)音樂(lè)將會(huì)是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意。通過(guò)這樣做，你會(huì)使自己平靜下來(lái)。
④Last but not least，you should talk with her first.
最后但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)該先和她談一談。
⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看來(lái)，你們應(yīng)該互相幫助。
3.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。
②As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.
如果你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加了解你，會(huì)愿意和你交朋友的。
③I believe that if you follow my advice，you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信，如果你聽(tīng)從我的建議，你會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處好的。
寫(xiě)作技巧
連句成篇，行文連貫
句子是由詞匯組成的，而文章是由句子組成的，遣詞造句要按語(yǔ)法和習(xí)慣表達(dá)，組句成篇也要按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。選擇能夠恰當(dāng)表示并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折、條件等意義的連詞，把要點(diǎn)句子連接成文，使句與句，段與段之間意思連貫，銜接自然，從而生動(dòng)、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)考題內(nèi)容。同時(shí)要根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要注意變換句式，避免句子結(jié)構(gòu)的單調(diào)性。如：使用不同結(jié)構(gòu)、不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，盡量使句型多樣化；多使用一些主從復(fù)合句來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單句，使行文更加流暢有力；改變句子開(kāi)頭方式，不要一味地都是主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，最后再在句末加上一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。增加書(shū)面表達(dá)的表現(xiàn)力。
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