《Into the wild》Section ⅣPPT課件
第一部分內(nèi)容：佳作背誦
題目要求：據(jù)報(bào)道， 藏羚羊(Tibetan antelope)因遭到非法捕殺而瀕臨滅絕，總數(shù)從1990年的100萬只銳減到現(xiàn)在不足10萬只。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給中國(guó)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的會(huì)長(zhǎng)寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．簡(jiǎn)述藏羚羊的現(xiàn)狀；
2．陳述原因(取羊皮獲利等)；
3．提出你的建議(加大宣傳力度、增加資金、選派志愿者等)。
[背誦范文]
Dear President，
I'm writing to give some suggestions to further protect the of Tibetan antelopes. As is often reported, too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their fur, from which the illegal hunters can make great profits. As a result, the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1,000，000 in 1990 to less than 100,000 at present.
Immediate measures must be taken to improve the present situation. Firstly, the importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be promoted. Secondly, would you provide more money for the conservation of the Tibetan antelopes? Last but not least, I suggest that some volunteers be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.
These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of the Tibetan antelopes.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[高分亮點(diǎn)]
1．本文作為一封建議信，格式正確，行文連貫，其中提建議的部分使用了firstly, secondly, last but not least等進(jìn)行分條，使文章條理清晰。
2．作者寫作功底深厚，對(duì)語(yǔ)言的掌控力較強(qiáng)，全文有多處用詞生動(dòng)形象，表意恰當(dāng)充分，如decrease rapidly, from ... to, immediate measures, improve, promote等。
3．文中多處使用被動(dòng)句，為文章增色不少，如are being hunted and killed, must be taken, should be promoted, be sent there等。
4．全文使用了很多高級(jí)句式，如定語(yǔ)從句“As is often reported”“from which the illegal hunters can make great profits”，suggest引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句中的虛擬語(yǔ)氣，I hope后跟賓語(yǔ)從句等。
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Into the wild PPT，第二部分內(nèi)容：技法指導(dǎo)
[通技法——學(xué)寫作規(guī)范]
本單元的寫作要求是描寫動(dòng)物。關(guān)于動(dòng)物的體裁有三種形式：
1. 說明文：介紹某種動(dòng)物，可從動(dòng)物體型、習(xí)性、特點(diǎn)等方面展開；
2．議論文：動(dòng)物與人類的關(guān)系以及如何保護(hù)動(dòng)物；克隆動(dòng)物的利和弊；
3．應(yīng)用文：建議信(如何保護(hù)動(dòng)物；寫信投訴人類對(duì)動(dòng)物的傷害)，保護(hù)動(dòng)物的演講稿及倡議信等；保護(hù)動(dòng)物的文章常常是首先說明現(xiàn)狀，比如數(shù)量減少，分析造成的原因，然后提出一些可行建議。
積“黃金”詞句，寫高分文章
一、說明緣由和背景的句式
1．I'm writing to say something about ... and give some suggestions to improve ...
2．As is known to all, the number of ... is reducing for the following reasons.
3．There are many reasons accounting for that.
4．Many hunters hunt and kill animals illegally for their skins and fur in order to make profits.
5．As a result, the habitats of them are on the decrease.
6．They are becoming endangered animals as a result of ...
二、提出建議的句式
1．First, the public should be educated to raise the awareness of protecting animals ...Besides, effective measures must be taken to ...
2．It's time to do ...
3．It is high time that ...
4．It is a good idea to do ...
5．We shall spare no effort to do ...
三、表達(dá)愿望的句式
1．I would be grateful if you can take my suggestions into consideration.
2．I think it necessary to call on all people to ...
3．If everyone of us can contribute a little, it will make a difference to ...
4．Only in this way can ...
... ... ...
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